最后，亚历就以梁启超的话共勉吧：造成今日之老大中国者，则中国老朽之冤业也;制出将来之少年中国者，则中国少年之责任也。

本篇认为，山大师在习作训练的初期，应采纳一条从有材料可依的习作方式过渡到脱离本本进行自由写作方式的途径。如对前文便可作以下评论：东征到打FromthearticlewelearnedaboutBritishshops,abouttheiropeningandclosingtimeandtheirservice.ButwefindthattherearesomethinginconvenientwithBritishshopservice.Firstisthetime.ShopsinBritainopenverylateandclosetooearly.SecondisthatthereisalmostnoSundayservice.Wherecanpeoplegoiftheysuddenlyneedtobuysomething?Thelastisthehabitofqueuing.Itwillbeawasteoftimeifthequeueistoolong.初学阶段，东征到打短文评论的字数一般也应在150字左右，不宜写大多。

这些形式均可以用于训练，中国但以提纲作文和关键词作文多用为佳.提纲作文是一种给出题目和段落提纲的习作方式，中国其段落写作提纲可以采用段落主旨句的形式，也可以是短语。MostshopsinBritainopenat9.00a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30intheevening.Smallshopsusuallycloseforanhouratlunchtime.Ononeortwodaysaweek-usuallyThursdayand/orFriday-somelargefoodshopsstayuntilabout8.00p.m.forlatenightshopping.Manyshopsareclosedintheafternoonononedayaweek.ThedaysisusuallyWednesdayorThursdayanditisadifferentdayindifferenttowns.NearlyallshopsareclosedonSunday.News-papershopsareopeninthemorning,andsellsweetsandcigarettesaswell.ButtherearelegalrestrictionsonsellingmanythingsonSundays.Manylargefoodshops(supermarkets)areself-service.Whenyougointooneoftheseshopsyoutakeabasketandyouputthethingsyouwishtobuyintoit.Youqueueupatthecash-deskandpayforeverythingjustbeforeyouleave.Ifanyonetriestotakethingsfromashopwithoutpayingtheyarealmostcertaintobecaught.Mostshopshavestoredetectiveswhohavethejobofcatchingshoplifters.Shopliftingisconsideredaseriouscrimebythepoliceandthecourts.Whenyouarewaitingtobeservedinashop,itisimportanttowaityourturn.Itisimportantnottotrytobeservedbeforepeoplewhoarrivedbeforeyou.ManypeoplefromoverseasareastonishedattheBritishhabitofqueuing.将短文缩写如下：过虎ThisarticletellsusaboutBritishshops.Britishshopsusuallyopenat9.00a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30p.m.Manyshopsareclosedintheafternoononedayaweek.NearlyallshopsareclosedonSundays.InBritain,manylargefoodshopsareself-service.Andwhenyouwaittobeservedinashop,youhavetowaitpatientlyforyourturn.这是一篇不超过100词的缩写，过虎句子基本上由原文各段落的主要内容构成。从有材可依到元材可依的训练过程应包括三个阶段：秦军一、短文缩写(Summary)阶段。

缩写是一种依材剪贴的习作方式，亚历基本上采用原材料中的词语和句子，仅作了部分调整，是最初级的习作方式。三个步骤的三种形式，山大师相承相继，循序渐进，为进入自由命题写作打下了良好的基础。

由于有段落写作提纲或主旨句等，东征到打进行习作时，减少了审题环节，且写作思路受到引导

中国ChristmasDayChristmasDayfallsonthetwenty-fifthofDecember.Itisaveryhappydayformanyboysandgirls.Beforethetermendsinsomeschools,thechildrenactanativity①orbirthplay,showinghowJesus②wasborninastable③。过虎9.It'sgoingtogetverybusyonThursday.Todayandtomorrowarejustthelullbeforethestorm。

汉语中常有阴沉着脸、秦军愁云密布等跟天气相关的词语，秦军那么英语中有没有类似的表达呢？下面我们一起来看一下吧：1.What'supwithhimtoday?Hehasafacelikethunder!他今天怎么了？他看着怒气冲冲的。亚历2.I'mabitdisappointedinJohnandDavid.Itturnedouttheywereonlyfair-weatherfriends。

12.You'llstealherthunderifyouwearthatdresstonight!如果你今晚穿那条裙子，山大师你会抢了她的风头的东征到打Divertedtraffic交叉路口Entrytomotorway高速入口Leftjunction左交叉口Approachingendofmotorway即将驶出高速Avoidthejams避免交通堵塞Dangerousbend弯道危险Lookleft(right)向左（右）看Lowbridgeahead前方桥低Slow,school前方学校请慢行Speedlimitof48km/h限速每小时48公里Thelawrequiresyouwearaseatbelt法规要求系安全带Thisvehiclestopsfrequently随时停车Newhoursofparkingcontrol停车控制新时段Noentry禁止驶人Nostoppingatanytime任何时间不准停车Nothoroughfare禁止通行Notradeorbusinessvehicleunlessauthorized未经允许货车禁止通行Pedestriancrossingahead注意前方人行横道Pedestriancrossing人行横道Pleasedrivecarefully请小心驾驶Roadclosed此路封闭